Today our group discuss and make our formal letter to apply a donation and permission from Dean of IPROM.
After do the formal letter we found that it is not easy to make a good formal letter and proposal.
Our first draft have been rejected!!! hmmmmm need to be edit again.... We have detect the error on the letter and proposal. Such as :
-typing error
-specific purpose of the letter
-justification of the format
As a conclusion we refer to a others formal letter and refer again to our lecturer Madam Alia.. Thanx Madam!!!
We will sent the second draft of the letter to office and hope that letter will be perfect!!!
Good luck everyone!:)
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